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the girl in the corner by ~Abios:iconAbios:



The dance
a glow in the distance
yet close
y heartening experience

the concept of a truth
revealed at long last
a glimmer of hope
to a long forlorn past

the studied simplicity
of the final act
no time for others
no time for tact

afraid
concerned
ecstatic
scorned

still despite
tis a girl
in this small corner
her personal world

a dress
not a suit
not a lie
but a truth

a hope by which to hang
has become a place to dwell
no concern
neither heaven nor hell

for the last mask comes loose
and like Abraham to his fathers idols
i break it
new freedom unbridled

now the lies lay
six feet below
for matt is not present in this place
tis Erin beneath the halogen glow
©2006-2009 ~Abios
:iconabios:

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just some self expresion

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i really like it =]

--
And neither the angels in heaven above
Nor the demons down under the sea
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee

-Edgar Allen Poe
:iconlevi3o4:
It seems like some of those words took a lot of effort to pick out. They really enhance the poem.

--
Winners never quit. Quitters never lose.
:iconabios:
i wrote because i needed to express how i feel about maddies plan and how much i want to go along with it
:iconotimaru:
Ha ha, No problem.
[ that was to your initial comment. x3 ]
And this piece really feels like it's speaking.
As if, if you didn't understand something, you could read it again, and the voice would change, and explain it to you.
Even though it uses such few words, those words really seem like they can speak themselves.

--
Auf.
:iconabios:
wow, thank you

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comments suck

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